Two brothers one goal!!

The Veil

I’m trapped in a world of denial.

There’s a being that can’t create.

I look at this and smile,

saying, saying, saying,

open and you will see,

that someday it will be.

Open your eyes,

before others cut you off,

creating their own indignant worlds of freedom.


4 responses

  1. A great post !
    Thanks for sharing.

    January 25, 2012 at 4:50 pm

    • Thanks for the reply. I will check out your blog as well.


      January 25, 2012 at 5:20 pm

  2. Hello friend,

    I have read a few of your poems. This one is good. I especially like the last two lines. They are very expressive of the world.

    January 29, 2012 at 10:41 pm

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